AGENDA:
View powerpoint about synthesis essay
Activity: Break in to groups and practice grading sample student essays
EQ: What is the AP ENG synthesis essay?
The AP English Language and Composition course is designed to enable students to become skilled readers and writers in diverse genres and modes of composition. As stated in the Advanced Placement Course Description, the purpose of the Language and Composition course is “to enable students to read complex texts with understanding and to write papers of sufficient richness and complexity to communicate effectively with mature readers” (The College Board, May 2007, May 2008, p.6).
Tuesday, April 30, 2013
Monday, April 29, 2013
More essays on lying
AGENDA:
New packets--19th century
Discuss Twain's essays on lying
Read Judith Viorst's modern essay
EQ: How does classification function as an organizational structure for essays?
New packets--19th century
Discuss Twain's essays on lying
Read Judith Viorst's modern essay
EQ: How does classification function as an organizational structure for essays?
Friday, April 26, 2013
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Mark Twain "On the Decay of the Art of Lying"/"My First Lie" DOUBLE TWIST exercise
Agenda:
EQ: What are the key rhetorical strategies Twain uses to write about lying?
Go over homework questions
Read Twain's "On the Decay of the Art of Lying" and "My First Lie"
Annotate and write in the margins as you read
Analyze the two passages using the DOUBLE TWIST. How does Twain use CLASSIFICATION to
distinguish KINDS of lies?
Classification (as means of ordering)- Arrangement of objects according to class; e.g., media classified as print, television, radio.
The lie of silent assertion
"My First Lie and How I Got Out of It" is a humorous little satire,
as we may guess from its title. The thorough and excellent notes in the
Library of America's Collected Tales, Sketches, Speeches, & Essays,
don't say so, but this reads like a speech, and in fact a number of
internal references suggest it was a speech that Mark Twain gave in
England:
A powerful and funny speech of Mark Twain's, well worth enjoying and pondering.
EQ: What are the key rhetorical strategies Twain uses to write about lying?
Go over homework questions
Read Twain's "On the Decay of the Art of Lying" and "My First Lie"
Annotate and write in the margins as you read
Analyze the two passages using the DOUBLE TWIST. How does Twain use CLASSIFICATION to
distinguish KINDS of lies?
Classification (as means of ordering)- Arrangement of objects according to class; e.g., media classified as print, television, radio.
Description
On the Decay of the Art of Lying is Mark Twain’s 1885 address to the Historical and Antiquarian Society of Hartford, Connecticut. In this witty piece of prose, Twain defends the rightful place of lying, which he declares to be “the fourth Grace, the tenth Muse, man’s best and surest friend.” Twain delivers a hilarious send-up of his very dignified cohorts and of American culture in general, skewering any and all who pride themselves on never telling lies. Manners and etiquette often disguise very different thoughts and emotions that most would never have the courage to voice out loud. But while lying has taken that place in our culture, Twain says it could actually be used for good. Rather than lying out of politeness, he suggests we might as well lie in order to protect and improve the lives of others. Only Mark Twain could suggest such a unique solution to this very widespread “problem” in society.The lie of silent assertion
Here in England they have the oddest ways. They won't tell a spoken lie — nothing can persuade them. Except in a large moral interest, like politics or religion, I mean. ... They will not even tell a lie for the fun of it ... This has a restraining influence upon me in spite of reason, and I am always getting out of practice.Twain provides some undoubtedly factual anecdotes about his youthful and adult accomplishments in the field of lying, with theory and analysis. He also takes swipes at situations involving George Washington (the cherry tree) and Joseph Chamberlain (the Boer War), as well as proverbial sayings from William Cullen Bryant and Thomas Carlyle:
Mr. Bryant said, "Truth crushed to earth will rise again." I have taken medals at thirteen world's fairs, and may claim to be not without capacity, but I never told as big a one as that. Mr. Bryant was playing to the gallery; we all do it.Of course, Mark Twain is not going to present a satirical speech without some sharp points amidst the fun. His principal target is not what is said out loud or even written, but the lie of silent assertion:
For instance. It would not be possible for a humane and intelligent person to invent a rational excuse for slavery; yet you will remember that in the early days of the emancipation agitation in the North the agitators got but small help or countenance from any one. Argue and plead and pray as they might, they could not break the universal stillness that reigned, from pulpit and press all the way down to the bottom of society — the clammy stillness created and maintained by the lie of silent assertion — the silent assertion that there wasn't anything going on in which humane and intelligent people were interested.Twain also indicts the millions who silently acquiesced in the infamous Dreyfus case (1894-1899), just concluded (essentially) in France. He then contrasts provocatively what we find acceptable for individuals with what is acceptable for nations. Then, to relieve the pressure while we try to digest this bits of theory and infamy, he easily slides into some humorous anecdotes.
A powerful and funny speech of Mark Twain's, well worth enjoying and pondering.
Monday, April 22, 2013
The War Prayer
AGENDA:
Go over essays.
ESSENTIAL QUESTION:
How does Mark Twain critique society?
Read and discuss The War Prayer.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sVYIRbmxHpc
On Lies and Slavery:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fnF-7bqyKuo
Go over essays.
ESSENTIAL QUESTION:
How does Mark Twain critique society?
Read and discuss The War Prayer.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sVYIRbmxHpc
On Lies and Slavery:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fnF-7bqyKuo
Thursday, April 18, 2013
Mark Twain Diary of Adam and Eve
Quickwrite:
Imagine the first man (Adam) encountering the first woman (Eve). Using "time-honored" STEREOTYPES of men and women, what might they think about each other when they first meet?
In Class Reading: Extracts from ADAM's diary Finish for homework
TMRW: Enter EVE
HMWK: Write a 40 minute essay for "Fenimore Cooper's Literary Offenses"
handwritten for AP practice
Imagine the first man (Adam) encountering the first woman (Eve). Using "time-honored" STEREOTYPES of men and women, what might they think about each other when they first meet?
In Class Reading: Extracts from ADAM's diary Finish for homework
TMRW: Enter EVE
HMWK: Write a 40 minute essay for "Fenimore Cooper's Literary Offenses"
handwritten for AP practice
Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Satire
ESSENTIAL QUESTION:
What are the two types of satire?
Definitions
Satire--Literary art of diminishing a subject by making it
ridiculous
and evoking toward it attitudes of amusement, contempt, scorn or
indignation. Takes its form from the genre it spoofs.
Horatian satire--After the Roman satirist
Horace: Satire in which the voice is indulgent, tolerant, amused,
and
witty. The speaker holds up to gentle ridicule the absurdities and
follies of human beings, aiming at producing in the reader not the anger
of a Juvenal,
but a wry smile.
Juvenalian
satire--After
the Roman satirist Juvenal: Formal satire in which the speaker
attacks
vice and error with contempt and indignation Juvenalian satire in
its
realism and its harshness is in strong contrast to Horatian satire.
Burlesque-- A form of comedy characterized by
ridiculous exaggeration and distortion.A serious subject may be treated
frivolously or a frivolous subject seriously. The essential quality
that
makes for burlesque is the discrepancy between subject matter and
style.
That is, a style ordinarily dignified may be used for nonsensical matter,
or a
style very nonsensical may be used to ridicule a weighty subject.
Parody--A composition that imitates the serious manner and
characteristic features of a particular work, or the distinctive style of
its
maker, and applies the imitation to a lowly or comically inappropriate
subject. Often a parody is more powerful in its influence on affairs
of
current importance--politics for instance--than its original
composition.
It is a variety of burlesque. Irony--Saying one thing and meaning another.
There are three main types of satire: Horatian, Juvenalian, and Menippean. While each type is distinct from the other in some factors, any satire may contain elements of all three. Horatian satire gently mocks, Juvenal aims to destroy and to provoke, and Menippean spreads its mental barbs at a wide number of targets. These types should not be confused with the different satirical devices, such as wit, sarcasm, and irony.
Horatian satire is the gentlest of the types of satire. It does not aim to find evil in things; instead, it is done from an affectionate, almost loving point of view. The emphasis is put on humor and on making fun of human dysfunction. While the subject of the fun can be social vices, it is usually an individual's follies that are teased. A key element of Horatian satire, unlike most other types, is that the audience is also laughing at themselves as well as at the subject of the mockery.
A good example of Horatian satire is the works of Jane Austen. Her novels, such as Pride and Prejudice, are mild mockeries of the Gothic novels produced by other female writers of her age. In Pride and Prejudice, she turns her Horatian satire on people and how they are viewed by the rest of society. This includes the noble landowner in Mr. Darcy, the priest in William Collins, and soldiers such as George Wickham.
Juvenal satire is the harshest type of satire, and it does not hold back in its barbed lacerations of its targets. Social vices, individuals, companies, and organizations can be the targets. The purpose of such invectives is to provoke an angry reaction from the audience aimed at the subject. As a result of this intention, the humor is put into the background and biting social criticism and polarized opinion come to the forefront.
William Golding's Lord of the Flies is a good example of Juvenalian satire. The object of mockery is people's need for power and rules, and it also mocks the lengths which people go to in order to obtain power and how this lust changes them. It is also an unsentimental look at the relationships between boys and how awful they can be.
Menippean satire is named after Menippus, and most closely resembles Juvenal's ideas on satire; however, it lacks the focus of a primary target. Rather than a single target, it takes a scattergun approach that aims poisonous prongs at multiple targets. As well as not sustaining narrative and being more rhapsodic, Menippean satire is also more mental. That said, this type of humor is typically baser at the same time.
While primary examples of the types of satire as produced by Horace and Juvenal themselves survive, the same cannot be said of Menippus. A good example of Menippean satire is Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland. The whole novel is a random collection of satires about people Carroll knew or knew of and of Oxford itself, both as a city and as a lifestyle.
More about satire:
Satire can be described as the literary art of diminishing or derogating a subject by making it ridiculous and evoking toward it attitudes of amusement, contempt, scorn, or indignation. It differs from the comic in that comedy evokes laughter mainly as an end in itself, while satire "derides"; that is, it uses laughter as a weapon, and against a butt existing outside the work itself. That butt may be an individual (in "personal satire"), or a type of person, a class, an institution, a nation, or even (as in Rochester's "A Satyr against Mankind," 1675, and much of Swift's Gulliver's Travels, 1726, especially Book IV) the whole human race. The distinction between the comic and the satiric, however, is a sharp one only at its extremes. Shakespeare's Falstaff is a comic creation, presented without derision for our unmitigated enjoyment; the puritanical Malvolio in Shakespeare's Twelfth Night is for the most part comic but has aspects of satire directed against the type of the fatuous and hypocritical Puritan; Jonson's Volpone (1607) clearly satirizes the type of man whose cleverness—or stupidity—is put at the service of his cupidity; and Dryden's MacFlecknoe (1682), while representing a permanent type of the pretentious poetaster, ridiculed specifically the living author Shadwell.
Satire has usually been justified by those who practice it as a corrective of human vice and folly; Pope remarked that "those who are ashamed of nothing else are so of being ridiculous." Its frequent claim (not always borne out in the practice) has been to ridicule the failing rather than the individual, and to limit its ridicule to corrigible faults, excluding those for which a person is not responsible. As Swift said, speaking of himself in his ironic "Verses on the Death of Dr. Swift" (1739):
Yet malice never was his aim;Satire occurs as an incidental element in many works whose overall mode is not satiric—in a certain character, or situation, or interpolated passage of ironic commentary on some aspect of the human condition or of contemporary society. But in many literary achievements, verse or prose, the attempt to diminish a subject by ridicule is the organizing principle of the whole, and these works constitute the formal genre of "satires." In discussing such writings the following distinctions are useful.
He lashed the vice, but spared the name. . . .
His satire points at no defect,
But what all mortals may correct. . . .
He spared a hump, or crooked nose,
Whose owners set not up for beaux.
(1) Critics make a broad division between formal (or "direct") satire and indirect satire. In formal satire the satiric voice speaks out in the first person; this "I" may address either the reader (as in Pope's Moral Essays, 1731-35; for example, Epistle II, "Of the characters of Women") or else a character within the work itself, who is called the adversarius and whose major function is to elicit and guide the satiric speaker's comments. (In Pope's "Epistle to Dr. Arbuth-not," 1735, Arbuthnot serves as adversarius.) Two types of formal satire are commonly distinguished, taking their names from the great Roman satirists Horace and Juvenal. The types are defined by the character of the persona whom the author presents as the first-person satiric speaker, and by the attitude and tone that such a persona manifests toward the subject matter and the readers of the work.
In Horatian satire the character of the speaker is that of an urbane, witty, and tolerant man of the world, who is moved more often to wry amusement than to indignation at the spectacle of human folly, pretentiousness, and hypocrisy, and who uses a relaxed and informal language to evoke from readers a smile at human follies and absurdities—sometimes including his own. Pope's Moral Essays and other formal satires for the most part sustain an Horatian stance.
In Juvenalian satire the character of the speaker is that of a serious moralist who uses a dignified and public style of utterance to decry modes of vice and error which are no less dangerous because they are ridiculous, and who undertakes to evoke from readers contempt, moral indignation, or an unillusioned sadness at the aberrations of humanity. Samuel Johnson's "London" (1738) and "The Vanity of Human Wishes" (1749) are distinguished instances of Juvenalian satire,
(2) Indirect satire is cast in another literary form than that of direct address. The most common indirect form is that of a fictional narrative, in which the objects of the satire are characters who make themselves and their opinions ridiculous by what they think, say, and do, and are sometimes made even more ridiculous by the author's comments and narrative style.
One type of indirect satire is Menippean satire, named for its Greek originator, the philosophical Cynic Menippus. It is sometimes called Varronian satire, after a Roman imitator, Varro; while Northrop Frye, in Anatomy of Criticism, pp. 308-12, suggests an alternative name, the anatomy, after a major English instance of the type, Burton's Anatomy of Melancholy (1621). Such satires are written in prose—though often with interpolated passages of verse—and constitute a miscellaneous form often held together by a loosely constructed narrative. Their major feature, however, is a series of extended dialogues and debates (often conducted at a banquet or party) in which a group of loquacious eccentrics, pedants, literary people, and representatives of various professions or philosophical points of view serve to make ludicrous the attitudes and viewpoints they typify by the arguments they urge in their support. Examples are Rabelais' Gargantua and Pantagruel (1564), Voltaire's Candide (1759), Thomas Love Peacock's Nightmare Abbey (1818) and other satiric fiction, and Huxley's Point Counter Point (1928), in which, as in Peacock, the central satiric scenes are discussions during a weekend at a country manor. Frye also classifies Lewis Carroll's two books about Alice in wonderland as "perfect Menippean satires."
Wednesday, April 10, 2013
Monday, April 8, 2013
I MISS YOU!
Hello Ms. Gamzon, Piper, Gretta, Oona, Alina, Ahmed, Maddy, Neriah, Matan, Noah, Thomas, Jannah, Caleb, Darren, Hannah, Matthew, Will, Liam, Jack, Clara, Michaela, Demetrius, Maya, Patrick, Otis, Kayla, Dominic, Tim, Tyler, Sophie, Amelia, Dayanara, and Ariyuanna
I hope you are doing well! Not a day goes by where I do not think of you and how much I miss you...please know that.
How are things going? Are you in love with the transcendentalism unit? I cannot wait to see Avenue Q; I will definitely be going to one of the shows! I am also planning to come in and visit for a day in May. I graduate May 11th, so it will be before then. I really want to sit in the courtyard and eat lunch or something on a sunny day (I'm weird- I know, but seriously...).
I am applying for jobs in the Rochester area so I may be around next year. Obviously, SOTA would be my number one choice! Teaching there with all of you would be my absolute dream job, you all made it such a special place for me, something I will cherish forever.
Enough about me, how are all of you? Fill me in on everything- essay contests, performances, softball games, etc. I would love to come to all of these things and support you.
I hope to hear from each and every single one of you!
Gratefully,
Ms. Petta
I hope you are doing well! Not a day goes by where I do not think of you and how much I miss you...please know that.
How are things going? Are you in love with the transcendentalism unit? I cannot wait to see Avenue Q; I will definitely be going to one of the shows! I am also planning to come in and visit for a day in May. I graduate May 11th, so it will be before then. I really want to sit in the courtyard and eat lunch or something on a sunny day (I'm weird- I know, but seriously...).
I am applying for jobs in the Rochester area so I may be around next year. Obviously, SOTA would be my number one choice! Teaching there with all of you would be my absolute dream job, you all made it such a special place for me, something I will cherish forever.
Enough about me, how are all of you? Fill me in on everything- essay contests, performances, softball games, etc. I would love to come to all of these things and support you.
I hope to hear from each and every single one of you!
Gratefully,
Ms. Petta
Writing the Transcendentalism paper
Welcome back, AP English
Writing your paper
1. After writing an intro defining Transcendentalism and its major themes, focus your own THESIS on its relevance to contemporary society.
2. Then, remember to discuss the central themes you are focusing on as they are written in the texts we have studied of Emerson, Whitman and Thoreau. Use text-based quotes to support your CLAIMS. Provide EXAMPLES from the texts. Cite MLA style or be sure to mention the documents you are using in the body text.
3. Finally, relate the Transcendentalists to a significant contemporary ISSUE. Are there contemporary writers or articles that make a connection between the Transcendentalists and our own times? What is essentially American and modern about the Transcendentalists?
4. And of course, finish with a conclusion and go back to your intro to revise and edit and strengthen your thesis.
Often the conclusion illuminates other aspects of your thesis that need to be included in the intro!
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