Tim O'Brien

http://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=tim+o+brien+things+they+carried&FORM=HDRSC3&adlt=strict#view=detail&mid=478559C35396C31A5AFE478559C35396C31A5AFE

Literary Terms for Quiz Fri.

Literary Terms for Quiz next Fri.

1. Allegory
2. Alliteration
3. Allusion
4. Ambiguity
5. Analogy
6. Antecedent
7. Antithesis
8. Aphorism
9. Apostrophe
10. Atmosphere
11. Anaphora

The Things They Carried

AGENDA:

The Things They Carried

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnNMUYJ9fm8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_o1T15dt0SQ 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CDh6zcZ7hEs 

 VOCABULARY WORDS: ANAPHORA, EPIGRAPH

"What they carried was partly a function of rank, partly of field specialty. As a machine gunner, Henry Dobbins carried the M-60, which weighed 23 pounds unloaded, but which was almost always loaded. He also carried between 10 and 15 pounds of ammunition draped in belts across his chest and shoulders."

"The things they carried were largely determined by necessity. Among them were P-38 can openers, pocket knives, heat tabs, wristwatches, dog tags, mosquito repellant, chewing gum, candy, cigarettes, salt tablets, packets of Kool-Aid, lighters, matches, sewing kits, Military Payment Certificates, and two or three canteens of water."

"They carried the land itself--Vietnam, the place, the soil-powdery-orange-red dust that covered their boots and fatigues and faces. They carried the sky. The whole atmosphere, they carried it, the humidity, the monsoons, the stink of fungus and decay, all of it, they carried gravity."

"They carried all the emotional baggage of men who might die. Grief, terror, love, longing--these were intangibles, but the intangibles had their own mass and specifc gravity, they had tangible weight. They carried shameful memories. They carried the common secret of cowardice barely restrained, the instinct to run or freeze or hide...They carried their reputations. They carried the soldier's greatest fear, which was the fear of blushing."

* Briefly discuss the differences between "literal" things that the soldiers carried and "figurative" things. What are some "literal" and "figurative" things that people carry with them every day?

Comma Rules

Rule No. 1: In a simple series, use a comma to separate the elements, but don’t put a comma before the conjunction.	Rule No. 2: Use a comma to separate two independent clauses connected by a coordinating conjunction.
Rule No. 3: Use a comma following an introductory clause or prepositional phrase of four words or more.	Rule No. 4: Use commas to set off modifiers that are not essential to the reader's ability to identify a particular person, place or thing.
Rule No. 5: Use commas to separate adjectives of equal rank.	Rule No. 6: Use commas to set off words that add emphasis, shift attention or provide a fuller explanation (parentheticals, "yes," "no," names in direct address).
Rule No. 7: Use commas to set off participial modifiers that come at the beginning of a sentence or after the verb.	Rule No. 8: Use a comma, carefully, to set off quotes or paraphrases.
Rule No. 9: Use a comma with hometowns, ages, years with months and days, names of states and nations with cities, affiliations and most large numbers.	Rule No. 10: Use a comma to separate duplicate words to eliminate confusion.

Peer Editing/Book Club Discussions

AGENDA:

Continue any peer editing left over from yesterday. 

Go over comma handout.

Form book club discussion groups and begin discussing your summer reading.

HOMEWORK:  Read "The Things They Carried" and "Love" for tomorrow (to pg. 30)

Peer Editing

AGENDA:

Today we will continue the peer editing in groups.

Groups: Discuss with your partners the essays and provide verbal feedback to each other as well as handing back their papers.

Whole class:  Make a list of the most common errors.  Groups report back what you have found as common errors in the papers.

For Monday:   BOOK CIRCLE Discussions

Prepare questions about the book you read this summer for your book circle.

Welcome back, 11th grade AP English

Welcome Back, AP English Per. 6 and 9!

AGENDA:

EQ: What is peer editing?

1. Taking care of business:  Discuss course criteria sheet for course overview and expectations again.

How to be awesome this year!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RwlhUcSGqgs

2. Using technology.  Use the computers to access the class blog in A239 or at home: View Stephen Fry youtube video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7E-aoXLZGY&feature=youtube_gdata

 and write a short response after learning how to log on to class blog (use your ID and birth date today to create a new password that you can easily remember)  and write a comment after viewing the video clip.  Think about language, grammar, and the conventions of English language usage.  Your daily comments will count towards your classwork grade.

3. Addressing the Essential Question:
In the next 3 days, we will examine peer editing as a model for your work this year in composition and ultimately for preparation for all the standardized exams you will be asked to take.

CLOSE READING involves the ability not only to write about what we read, but also to be able to discuss it.  EVIDENCE and CLAIMS is also part of the Common Core, but also part of studying other content areas.  The STRATEGY is that you make an ARGUMENT  (involving one or several CLAIMS from the TEXT) and provide EVIDENCE after CLOSE READING of the EVIDENCE and  CLAIMS you are presented with. (Sounds like we're building a nation of lawyers, huh?)  Yet, I've always told you to think like a DETECTIVE and write like a LAWYER.

Question #2 on the AP exam asks you to read a passage (unknown, not studied before) and then analyze it.  Yet, you have the skills.  So how do you do it?

Handout:  Peer editing Worksheets
We will share the 5 SOAPSTONE essays you wrote this summer (BRAVO!) and begin to peer edit in groups of 4. First, let's discuss the PEER EDITING HANDOUT:

What is the prompt and how does it want us to handle it?

 Let's look at organization and development.

Is a four or five paragraph organization appropriate or satisfactory for a test response?

Long enough?  Developed enough?

Language and mechanics. This is a big category (we need to discuss this later, but you can sense it now as you read):
sentence structure (SYNTAX),
use of language (DICTION),
grammar and usage.

For tomorrow:
Handout: AP Resource packet

Assignment: Go over AP terms --first ten words-- "the A list" for quiz next week